The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2024.
The percentage of workforce between three sectors (agriculture, service and industry) in 3 contries in 1980 and the predicted proportion in 2024 was illustrated in the given charts.
Overall, during a period of 44 years, it is clear that the services have dominant rate of employment compare to the agriculture just accouting for a small proportion in country A and C. While in country B, agriculture was the main source of jobs.
To begin with, in 1980 people work in the services acounted for roughly 45%, 25% and 65% then are predicted to increse to 55%, 40%, and 80% in all surveyed country A, B, C respectively. In contrast to this upward tendency, the proportion of those employed in agriculture, which acounted for more than haft workers in country B (approximately 55%) and 20%, 5% in country A, C are supposed to decrease by about 3-10% in 2024.
The change trend chart of the employee’s demand to industry depicted a different in each country. While in country A and C, employees worded in this sector was both roughly around 30% and are expected to slightly reduce in the future. In country B this proportion was 20% and is expected to significantly increase to double (40%).
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...untry B approximately 55% and 20%, 5% in country A, C are supposed to decrease by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79512195122 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88968297531 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5054895934 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221419823502 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939197647202 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425688476626 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134550728216 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358796548443 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.