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The bar chart shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions by some mobile phone manufacturers between 2007 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the quantity of cell phones consumed in millions by four mobile brands, namely Nokia, Samsung, Motorola and Apple over a five-year period.
Overall, it is clear that Samsung and Apple were on upward trends while Nokia and Motorola experienced remarkable declines.
Looking at the details, as regards Nokia, mobile phone sales started the period at the highest point among four companies in 2007 with 436 million products, and then there were fluctuations between 422 millions and 475 millions in the next four years, followed by a sudden drop to end at 33...
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