The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use

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The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use.

The chart illustrates how many individuals visiting a community website over 2 years.
Overall, the first year had higher page views than the second one in most months. In addition, both years had similar trends, with the downward seen in April.
In July of the first year of use, the number of users visiting a community website stood at 25.000 which was higher than roughly 5.000 in July of the second year. From August to October, the first year witnessed a gradual increase in the volume of visitors while this figure for the second year trended in the opposite direction, dropping to 10.000 visits in September before going up back to 20.000 visits in August.
From November to February, the website traffic in the first year gradually increased while during the same period in the second year, it fluctuated around 15.000 visits. In April, both years hit the lowest point at approximately 15.000 and 5.000 visits, respectively. The number of visitors in the first year continued to climb considerably to roughly 25.000 while this figure for the second year remained unchanged at 5.000 visits in June.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4683216692 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8684975178 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378165316172 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178808917521 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096874628243 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233651905134 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069532553391 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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