The bar chart displays the changes in the portion of aging population living in three different countries including Germany, Canada and the UK in the 20-year-period from 1980 and some projections for 2030.
Overall, during the given period, there is an upward trend for all countries' figures. Germany always keeps the highest rate of elderly citizens and there will be a turnover among those of Canada and the UK at the end of 2030.
At the starting point in 1980, Germany had the highest number of 15%, following by the UK with slightly under 15% and Canada with the lowest figure of 10%. After 20 years, the figures of Germany and Canada increased the same rate of 5% ti relatively 20% and 15% while the UK slightly rose to 15%.
By 2030, it is predicted that Germany will keep it highest rank with 25% whereas that of Canada will rocket to the second place with over 20% in comparison to the UK at last rank with right under 20%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the highest'.
Suggestion: it the highest
... it is predicted that Germany will keep it highest rank with 25% whereas that of Canada wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57396449704 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33350755709 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6201920232 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101557260109 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562414698461 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516700315675 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744177739087 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547448375789 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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