Given a column chart comparing four nations in term of the proportion of the global population in two years 1950 and 2002, and also a prediction for 2050.
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that there was an upward trend in the proportion of the global population in India, whereas the other three countries saw the opposite trend in their rate of population. Additionally, it is predicted that India will become the most crowded nation in the future.
Looking at the details, in 1950, China has the proportion of nearly a quarter in the total of world population, making it the highest figure among the four nations. The figure for India was much lower with 15%, while that for the USA and Japan were 7% and 3% respectively. In 2003, the rate of the population in China decreased significantly to a fifth of the global population, whilst India’s figure witnessed a slight rise to around 17%. The figures for the USA and Japan also decreased slightly to 5% and 2% in turn.
In 2050, it is projected that the population rate of China will continuously go down to 15%, while that of India will increase steadily to nearly 20%, making it the highest figure compared to other nations. The population of the USA will remain stable at 5% and the figure for Japan will diminish considerably to roughly 2% of the global population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74042553191 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67777601417 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48085106383 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7263283139 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.777777778 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224137458021 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932139716532 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786563078131 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148853321357 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823042721348 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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