The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011.

The supplied chart illustrates the British industrial personnel distribution in various fields in two particular years : 1841 and 2011.

Overall, with 36%, manufacturing made up the biggest percentage of employees of the UK in 1841, whereas in 170 years later, services accounted for the dominated proportion of 81%.

Regarding to the transferral of workforce sharing, there was an upward tendency in the percentage of workers working in services and construction. To be more specific, from 33%, employee proportion of services increased by 48%, making up a massive gap. that of construction in 1841 was 3% less than in 2011.

On the contrary, downward trend was observed in the distribution of workers in the other industries, namely manufacturing, agriculture / fishing and energy / water. According to the chart, the figures of manufacturing declined by three third of that in 2011. Both of the data belonging to agriculture / fishing and energy / water ended at 1% in the second year of the survey. Interestingly, the proportion of personnel in energy / water industry always bottomed the chart at 3% and 1% in 1841 and 2011 respectively.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, so, third, whereas, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36464088398 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22114286995 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.080157674 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234320455053 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960978923702 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758993794372 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136261880118 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339642548554 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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