The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices.
Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
The given graph compares the annual amount of energy consumed by a number of 16 household appliances and the corresponding expenses. Overall, it can be seen that while the highest consumption of energy was attributed to a well-functioning spa, the electric blanket, the microwave oven and the television needed minim mount of the whole harnessed electricity.
Looking at the details, it seems that keeping the spa in a gook working status requires around 2300 kwh each year which is reflected by the highest expenditure among all given devices, of approximately 1190 dollars. The pool pump needs approximately 1500 kwh and this requires sum of money, of just under 1500 dollars. Meanwhile, the freezer, heating the bed and drying the clothes and the washing machine consumed each roughly between 800 and 1100 kwh and people have to pay for this around 70-85 dollars yearly. By contrast, some in-house activities requires far less for their function. Among them, each of using a computer, washing dishes automatically, using the electric cooking machine or the dehumidifier consumes and cost about half the electricity needed and expenses brought by the refrigerator, which makes up just over 85 dollars.
Finally, the television, cooking at the microwave and using an electronic blanket account for the least quantity of power, of around 10, 15 and 17 kwh respectively, and the minimum budget of approximately 15-20 dollars annually.
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...all given devices, of approximately 1190 dollars. The pool pump needs approximat...
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...ately 1190 dollars. The pool pump needs approximately 1500 kwh and this requires...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27947598253 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95476082694 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0280934335 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.125 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811619438082 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328085810501 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208720164966 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467463602381 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209710046888 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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