Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
There is a common belief that international tourism has negatively impacted people' s life in some countries. Although there are some reasons for this tendency, a few solutions ought to be implemented in order to cope with this attitude towards the presence of tourists in their countries.
Firstly, the main factor which leads to this belief is the fact that when traveling to remote areas, tourists become careless about the peace and steadiness of a country. For example, those who are visiting far-flung locations within the country of Thailand are not aware that this country has very deep-rooted traditions and they do not respect their customs and habits, during their stay there. As a result, locals are deprived of the peaceful and relaxing life they used to have.
Another point to consider is that nowadays, youngsters are being attracted by the Western lifestyle and foreigners are only encourage them to do this. Take the example of Chinese women who, instead of using their traditional dresses, they have become eager and delighted to put on some fancy western clothes. Being given this, locals are on the verge of losing their traditions and native spirits by accepting foreign people on their land.
That being said, there are some pragmatic measures that should be taken to tackle with this sense that local people have in terms of losing their culture. For instance, in order to raise tourists' awareness on their own behavior and make them respect others' culture, the local government should spread banners on the streets and broadcast specific programmes on television. Moreover, local authorities should empower police to impose fines for tourists caught dropping litter on the streets.
To sum up, although foreigners' behavior brought some unpleasant consequences in touristic areas, the government and society ought to take some potentially effective measures to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26557377049 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58271183642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2784413735 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250186351277 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926557618805 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707307431631 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141048008598 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095965472624 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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