The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

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The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

Submitted by DarshShah on Thu, 05/09/2019 - 05:52

<p style="white-space: normal;"><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The given bar graph exhibits the proposed oil production of 6 countries between 1990 to 2010, whose capacity is measured in millions of barrels per day.</span></p><p style="white-space: normal;">The end result stats that comparatively the prolongation of the oil is uplifted in all the 6 countries. However, Saudi Arabia gains a significant rose with the maximum proposed generation of 14 million barrels per day in 2010 which was expected just over 8 million barrels per day in 1990. In contrast, the minimum origination prospected was of Qatar, showed a slight fluctuation of&nbsp;<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">1 million barrels per day</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">&nbsp;from 2000 to 2010.</span></p><p style="white-space: normal;">The other provinces saw a little bit of climbing in over the period. The proposed oil production of Iran was 3 million barrels per day, co-relate to that with approximately 2&nbsp;<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">million barrels per day</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">&nbsp;of the other three countries. Although production did not hike in 2000 in the UAE, the quantity of oil originated in 2010 in Iran uplifted to over 4 million barrels per day matching the figure with the production of Iraq, Kuwait, and the UAE</span></p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 903, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...normal;'>The other provinces saw a little bit of climbing in over the period. The pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.62234042553 4.92477711251 134% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.5821648789 2.65546596893 210% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4651477349 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.0 112.824112599 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.6 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0275243248916 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209727981569 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0166332138499 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275243248916 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.2329268293 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.71 11.4140731707 190% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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