A glance at the provided bar charts reveal the proportion of marriage and divorce figures per thousand people in eight diferent nations in 1981 and 1994. It is clearly apparent that the statistic of married people showed a decline among the majority countries compared while the proportion of people who got divorced mostly increased. Additionally, the statistic of USA people who got married or divorced surpassed the other nations.
Looking for more details about the marriage, the USA stood the highest number among other countries at above 10 people per thousand inhabitants in 1981. However, the number subsequently dropped to 9 marriage per thousand people. The other six nations also showed a downward trends which felt by typically 1 per thousand people. On the other hand, Denmark was the only country which has an opposite pattern which has an incline from 5 to arround 7 per thousand people.
Regarding divorce, the figures also dominated by the USA although the figures decreased from at just over 5 to around 4,5 per thousand people. Besides, Danish people reported to get divorce also revealed a slightly decreased by around 0,1 per thousand inhabitants. In the remaining 5 countries, the statistic of divorce showed an upward trends ranging from by around 0,1 to 0,5 per thousand people. Interestingly, divorced German people remained unchanged during the periods at 3 per thousand people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported getting'.
Suggestion: reported getting
...thousand people. Besides, Danish people reported to get divorce also revealed a slightly decrea...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g the periods at 3 per thousand people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22466960352 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70551298291 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528634361233 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5584586766 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139078949936 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658571202269 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501905526907 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104406609951 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444532724053 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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