The pie charts illustrate the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in USA in general consumption. However, if if it is taken too much it will harmful for human body.
Overall, sodium and saturated fat are most consumed in dinner, while added sugar stayed first in snack.
In the first chart, most consumed sodium is in dinner which is almost half of total consumption. The amount of sodium which consumed in snacks and breakfast is almost equals to lunch (14%,14% and 29%, gradually).
The following chart shows that the difference between snacks and lunch is just 5%, where former taking 21% and latter taking 26%. In the breakfast, 16% saturated fat is eaten. However, dinner remained the largest proportion of whole consumption by taking more than a third in USA.
Last chart depicts that in USA, added sugar is mostly taken while taking snacks, 42%. The remaining consumption took place when enjoying breakfast, lunch and dinner 16%, 19% and approximately a quarter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: if
...in USA in general consumption. However, if if it is taken too much it will harmful fo...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...USA in general consumption. However, if if it is taken too much it will harmful fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, third, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53740605861 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8746727726 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29871528742 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128016100846 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12213079155 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179678166459 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772932865913 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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