At present time, teenagers are causing many social difficulties. Some think that it is happening due to spending few time of parents with their children and they are engage with their own job. I agree with this statement because the parents are busy with building own career and they are most likely to support their family financially.
Everyone wants to create his own background without depending anyone. The major means of creating base is earning money and today's generation is tend to do so. So, everybody want to study more and more so that they can figure out an easy way to find job for supporting themselves financially. Sometimes mothers do not leave their job after giving birth of a child. Thus, child do not get enough cear of its mother and grow up with loneliness. When this child become younger, he or she tend to do anything as they want, it might good or bad for society, and bad behaviour causes problem in society.
In other words, having job holder parents of a child get less guidance of parents, who work all day long in an institution, not get that much time to give their child. The parents sometimes ignore their child because of less time. For example, in my neighbourhood, some mothers and fathers both do job and stay minor proportion of their time in their home and with their children. Logically, their children get less guidance and get out from home to make noise and shouting in our roads which disturb the surrounding people. Some people also complained about this to those parents in spite of not getting any response. As a result of this, whole society is concerne about children and forcing them to leave the society.
In a nutshell, parents spending less time with children and more busy with their job are the main reasons of rising anti-social behaviour amongst children, because every parent busy to build their own background and give financial support to their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...nk that it is happening due to spending few time of parents with their children and they...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'engaged'.
Suggestion: engaged
...arents with their children and they are engage with their own job. I agree with this s...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... earning money and todays generation is tend to do so. So, everybody want to study m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...en this child become younger, he or she tend to do anything as they want, it might g...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for example, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7921686747 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45638947491 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4241448459 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252908468352 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908220579585 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569824361548 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159895428285 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370283348567 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.