The diagrams give us information about how London and other areas of England's citizens spent money on housing expenses from 1995 to 2013.
In general, the average number of house prices in England experienced a growing up trend in the mentioned period. It is obvious that meanwhile London had the highest number, North East seemed to be easier to live because of its lowest average price.
In 1995, this figure of London was nearly 140000 pounds. It was lower than that one of England which was 200000 pounds per year. Then, in 2013, the average house cost in London increased to the same number as England's in 1995, At that time, the data of England reached a peak at 400000 that was over twice as bigger as that one of the capital.
In the second chart, it can be seen that the average price of house in London got the first ranked at 400000 pounds in 2013. In contrast, this data of Midlands and North East was the 2 lowest numbers of the chart at about 100000. Moreover, those numbers in South East, South West and North West were at the middle of the graph and decreased respectively.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: nhiduong1901
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, so, then, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5404040404 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19213446785 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4048681109 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302291601947 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128118847453 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895414503012 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190560461721 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427262200582 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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