The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world

The graph illustrates the entire manufacturing production of Asia, Europe and the Rest of the world in the year(1840,1880,1920,1960,2000). Units are measured in Percentage.

Overall, the manufacturing production of Asia and Europe was equal in the years 1840 and 1920 respectively. Europe production of manufacturing is highest of all regions and comparatively higher than Asia and the other parts of the world. The rest of the world had very low manufacturing production but raised a certain amount in the coming years.

In terms of manufacturing production, In the year 1840 Asia had 50% on this as opposed to 40% in Europe and 10% in rest of the world. The production rate in 1920 was higher in Europe than in Asia and other parts of the world(20%,50% and 30% respectively).

On the other hand, the percentage of manufacturing production in the year 1880(30%, slightly above 40% ) was higher for Asia and Europe compared to that in 1960 (marginally over 30%, under 40% respectively). The rest of the world had reached its highest production in the year 1960 with equal to Europe with almost 40%. The manufacturing production decreased for Europe and the Rest of the world in 2000 by more than almost 5% and considerably less than 3%.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... in the year 188030%, slightly above 40% was higher for Asia and Europe compared ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03381642512 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43862956126 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415458937198 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5251818465 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439671250979 0.215688989381 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207764865429 0.103423049105 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956885637487 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323097660993 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419066926331 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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