The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of customers visiting the theaters, from 2003 to 2007, during seven days of the week, in a European country.
In general, people would rather watch films in cinemas in the weekends than weekdays. It is immuatably true that Saturday is the day which has the highest income earned from the number of people visit the theaters.
The proportions of customers visiting cinemas from Monday to Thursday were the very low, which were compared with the remaining three days of the week. It was 10% on Monday of 2003 and rose by around 3% in two years before dropped to 12% in 2007. The number of people watching films in theaters on Saturday saw a similar growth from 40% in 2000 to 45% in 2005 and decreased to 43% in two year later. Meanwhile, the figure of Friday remained stable during the period shown
While the data of six remaining days of the week increased generally, this of Wednesday tended to decrease over 3 given years. In 2000, the percentage of people visiting the cinemas on Wednesday was 16%; however, it dropped by around 2% to 14% in 2005 and reached the lowest point of 9% in 2007. It was the similar bottom at 9% in the proportuon of people watching film on every Thursday of 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e watching films in theaters on Saturday saw a similar growth from 40% in 2000 to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61261261261 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4205750366 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9849076732 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167789792483 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071386479039 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426148375635 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112776830689 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311620538632 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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