Some people think that school should teach the children to be a good person, however, others think that the teacher should teach them how to develop their career and make money. To extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that children should be taught at school to enhance their job-specific skills instead of becoming well behaved people in the future. Although I agree that behavioural education plays an important role, I personally believe that developing career abilities is also crucial for students.
Firstly, the large number of advocates are inclined towards the fact that schools should educate children to be good citizens. This is because educators have the propensity for effecting greatly on the cognitive and behavioral development of youngsters. To put it simply, lessons including the curriculums are guidelines for students’ future luggage. One clear example is Ethics which subject involves moral lessons teach children how to behave appropriately in each situation. Therefore, they will not far into evils when they grow up. Generally, education brings beneficial effect on behavior and cognitive of schoolchildren.
It is immuatably true that students should be inculcated job-specific abilities at schools. Specifically, career orientation programs should be included in curriculums as they help children know which is their strengths and their weaknesses. Consequencely, they can find the professions matching their abilities. From my pespective, advises from experts may be valuable suggestions about choosing the right careers, further, the professional knowledge they provide may be indespensable for children in the future. As all things mentioned above, career education at educational institutions is significantly crucial for schoolchidren.
To sum up, academies should educate students to be good citizens, however, i personally firmly believe that inculating essential job abilities is also vital for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90909090909 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17360538775 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644268774704 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8622638046 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225171241338 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731877599989 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609752312065 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144224674727 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280311598369 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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