The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

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The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of people visiting cinemas in a European nation on seven day of the week in a period of four years from 2003 to 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that there were small fluctuations over three years. People tended to go to the cinema on the weekend rather than on weekdays in this country.
Looking at the figures for the year 2003, on weekdays ranging from Monday to Thursday, while Tuesday had the highest percentage of people going to the cinemas, which was exact 20%, other days were under 20% and the lowest statistic could be seen on Monday, at only 10%. The proportion of movie-goers on Friday and Sunday were higher, at 30% for both, and that of Saturday was double compared to Tuesday, at 40%.
Over the next four years, while the percentage of people going to movie theatre on Friday remained unchanged, the number of that on the weekdays increased slightly to 43% and 33% for Saturday and Sunday, respectively. At the same time, there were more people going to the cinemas on Monday and Thursday, with the figures increasing about 3%. The portion of cinema-goers declined to 19% and 9% for Tuesday and Wednesday, respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or Tuesday and Wednesday, respectively.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7572815534 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54824316305 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.464064635 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217640454186 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982291019942 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718012794305 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142145060219 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514028542179 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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