The graph below shows the number of enquires received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

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The graph below shows the number of enquires received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The given line chart depicts the information about the number of enquires sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city by three means of communication in a period of 6 months, from January to June, in the year 2011.
Overall, it can be seen that enquiries sent in person and via telephone by visitors were dominant while the number of that sent by letter or email was the least popular choice. In addition to this, there were some significant changes in the numbers of enquires among three types of communication in that year.
In January, there were 900 via telephone and approximate 800 email and letter enquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office, while there was only under 500 tourists asked for the information in person. Over the next two months, the letter and email enquiries gradually declined while the enquiries in person surpassed that and became the second popular metho in March.
After March, the number of people used letter and email to enquire information from Tourist Information Office dropped dramatically, hit the bottom at only under 400 and sustained its rate until June. At the same time period, the number of enquiries in person rose sharply, from 800 to almost 2000. The number of enquiries via telephone also increased rapidly and peaked at 1600 in June.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94090909091 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58962887031 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2750906265 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216896334853 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101376954427 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083493556266 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150819543999 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875384273593 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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