Below is a chart showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to November Total incidences of violent crime are shown in addition to incidences of 4 serious crime types

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Below is a chart showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to November. Total incidences of violent crime are shown in addition to incidences of 4 serious crime types

The pictorial chart depicts the number of four serious crime types in United Kingdom throughout the year from December to November.
Overall, the antisocial behaviour has the highest number of crime. Which is near to 800. Whereas, the criminal damage is least as compare to other incidences.
To begin with, the violent crime rate is the highest then two crime types but less than antisocial behaviour. Whereas, the Robbery crime type approximately equal from December to January. It is the last third highest crime as juxtaposed to other.
Jumping into remaining data, the criminal damage has the lowest proportion. It is on the least point than others. This crime type is almost same however, in the April it has the lowest complete otherwise it is equal throught a year.Moreover, the antisocial behaviour is on the zenith point from all other crime types. It reveals in the chart the number of crime is 400 but it gradually increases to 800

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aviour has the highest number of crime. Which is near to 800. Whereas, the criminal d...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pes but less than antisocial behaviour. Whereas, the Robbery crime type approximately e...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...e otherwise it is equal throught a year.Moreover, the antisocial behaviour is on the zen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, then, third, whereas, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96855345912 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61579275586 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2178002575 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289399866641 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107768235972 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900815991866 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188212634986 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805841837265 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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