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cambridge 6-Test 1-Writing Task 1
The line graph describes global water use by sector and the tabel illustrates water need in Brazil and Congo between 1900 and 2000.
The major consumption of water in the world is absorbed by Agriculture. It increse every year approximately from 0,5km3 to 3 km3. Industry take second place of using water, it is not more than 1 km3 around 100 years. The lowest user of water is domestic costumer abour 0,3 km3 along a hundred years.
Data shows a linear corelation among population,irrigated land and water consumption per person. Bazil which has 176 milion inhabitants need 26.500 km2 water ...
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It increse every year
It increases in every year
Industry take second place
Industry takes the second place
Congo have to fullfil 8 m3
Congo has to fulfill 8 m3
water consumption rise
water consumption rises
bigger country need much more water than small nation .
bigger country needs much more water than small nation .
Sentence: The line graph describes global water use by sector and the tabel illustrates water need in Brazil and Congo between 1900 and 2000.
Error: tabel Suggestion: table
Sentence: It increse every year approximately from 0,5km3 to 3 km3.
Error: km3 Suggestion: my
Error: increse Suggestion: increase
Sentence: The lowest user of water is domestic costumer abour 0,3 km3 along a hundred years.
Error: abour Suggestion: about
Sentence: Data shows a linear corelation among population,irrigated land and water consumption per person.
Error: corelation Suggestion: correlation
Sentence: Bazil which has 176 milion inhabitants need 26.500 km2 water for rice field and 359 m3 each person.
Error: milion Suggestion: million
Sentence: In the other country, Democratic Republic of Congo have to fullfil 8 m3 for every one people,100 km2 on watering corp area to support 5,2 million member of country's live.
Error: fullfil Suggestion: fulfill
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