Cambrigde 7 - test 2 - Writing task 1
"The graph above shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of mear in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."
The graph compares how many grams of fish and 3 separate types of meat were consumed per week by a person in a European country over a course of 25 years starting from 1979.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the consumption of beef, lamb and fish experienced a downward trend with the exception of chicken over the time frame. Also, the amount of fish was lowest during the given period.
In 1979, beef’s consumption registered the highest among the four, standing at approximately 220 grams per person per week. Then, this number saw a substantial fluctuation between 1979 and 1984, before declining sharply to above 100 grams in 2004. Similarly, a downward trend was witnessed in the amount of lamb, as it stood at 150 grams in 1979 and decreased slightly to 60 grams, despite some fluctuations in the middle of the course.
By contrast, there was a significant increase in the consumption of chicken which reached the peak of 250 grams in 2004. During the 25 years period, fish’s consumption remained stable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...b and fish experienced a downward trend with the exception of chicken over the time frame. Also, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8813559322 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71868257765 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9511888052 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160897935356 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697539390659 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267477111952 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969894298224 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122375747826 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.