The two picture illustrate the process of producing cement and how this cement is used to make concrete.
In general, it can be seen that there are 5 main steps in cement production, while only 2 stages are required to produce concrete.
At the first of making cement, limestone and clay are crushed and become powder before mixing. Following that, this powder is brought into a rotating heater where it is heated in high temperature. In the next step, the mixtures are grinded and then cement is produced. Finally, cement is packaged into bags and is prepared for producing concrete.
The production of concrete uses many materials include: cement, water, sand and gravel in proportion of 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively. All ingredients are mixed together by concrete mixer. Final process is that concrete is created for building purposes.
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 61
- In school and universities, girls tend to choose art while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed? 56
- In school and universities, girls tend to choose art while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed? 56
- To what extent has the internet made life more convenient?Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 78
- the flow chart shows trampling the negative effect of tourist walking in the countryside for the environment 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65379974023 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5886897563 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380719575378 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132242249277 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820289181365 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198221640907 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109257561068 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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