The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This chart illustrates the percentage of british people giving money to charity at various age range for the years 1990 and 2010. The ages were divided into 5 groups; 18-25 yrs. old, 26-35 yrs. old, 36-50 yrs. old, 51-65 yrs. old, and the >65 yrs. old age groups.
At the year 1990, the graph shows the top age groups who are able to donate money to charity were the people at the age 36-50 and the lowest are the age group of 18-25 yrs old. The 36-50 yrs. old age group are usually the ones who are already into investment and are commonly with stable job, 40% of them gave money to charity. Meanwhile, the group with least amount of donations are the ones at around 18-25 yrs. old. Most of the time this group is still at college level or entry level at work, with minimal amount to donate. 15% of this age group donated to charity. The 35% of the British people at the age of 51-65 years old were generous enough to help for a cause. While 30% of the 26-35 yrs. old & >65 yrs. old (Middle group) equally provided on the same year.
However by the year 2010, you can see the drastic change in percentage of donors for the charity and the improvements on the age groups as well. In this bar graph, you can see that the hard earners and near to retire age group of 51-65 yrs. old, from 35%., 40% of them donated money to the charity placing them as one of our high paying donors. The age group of 18-25 still remained as the least donors at only 5% of their population donated this year. The Second and equally group of donors were the age group of 36-50 & >65 years of age at the percentage of thirty five. The third group, at the percentage of 25 are the 26-35 yrs. old.
The generosity of the British people may vary with their age and career in life. This bar graph only shows the year 1990 & 2010. To sum it up, I can conclude that the age group 36-50 yrs. old who were the highest percentage of donors at the year 1990 still continued to prosper and donate at the charity by the time they reach 51-65 years old at the year 2010. The age group of 18-25 yrs. old may remained as the least percentage of donors but we can't deduct their contribution to the charity throughout the years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, still, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 33.7804878049 195% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 965.302439024 184% => OK
No of words: 417.0 196.424390244 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26858513189 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 3.73543355544 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97676985196 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.374100719424 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 283.868780488 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 8.94146341463 324% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0348035827 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3793103448 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.3793103448 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93103448276 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.09268292683 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173296745815 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628730692941 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894180978271 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146179532914 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355881085405 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 11.4140731707 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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