In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Nowadays, more people is being hooked up with the foods being sold by different fast food chains because of its flavorful taste in some countries. They didn't know that too much food intake of this kind of food could lead them to serious suffering in health. That is why government is imposing them to have a higher tax.
I agree for this program because of the percentage of people consuming fast food will decrease. May be because they would rather buy raw ingredients and cook for themselves instead of buying foods from fast foods that costs expensive because of the tax. Moreover, the advantage of this is people will get more concious about the foods they will eat.
Furthermore, I disagree for this because many fast food chains might close their businesses because of the decreasing customers. As the result of the high tax, people will just buy affordable foods that they can have. On the other hand, what if there are people who really can't afford delicious foods, how can they eat? How can they survive? What if they can only afford those foods in the fast food chains? Will they just starve therselves?
In this essay, I will agree that people should lessen the fast foods so that having serious health problems will not occur. You can just buy raw ingredients and cook for your own food. By this, you can save more money and assure yourself that the food you will eat is clean, delicious and healthy. I disagree to the imposing of a higher tax by the governments because we should also have concern to the people in that business. What if, it is their only business or work, What will happen to them if they close their business. That is why I will suggest to just make a campaign or advertisements about the fast foods. Like the benefits people could have if they eat too much fast foods and what might happen to them. Then it is up to those people whether they still eat fast foods oftenly or they will reduce their food intake of this kind of food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...flavorful taste in some countries. They didnt know that too much food intake of this ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd, what if there are people who really cant afford delicious foods, how can they ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55774647887 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22187997982 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 6.0 0.384769539078 1559% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5897022248 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359644386479 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133149361831 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704270047673 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257999978146 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584049698242 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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