The chart below gives information about historical data of the global gold demand for the last decade Summarise the information

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The chart below gives information about historical data of the global gold demand for the last decade.

Summarise the information.

Global gold demand is made of four main factors. Including, central banks' buying, investment products for risk management, jewelry, and consumption in technology.
Global gold market demand was stable relatively between 2011 and 2019, but by 2020, it had fallen by 13 percent, to reach 3,803.1 tons, due to the impact of the Covid-19 pandemic, which was the lowest level since the 2008 financial crisis. The decline was mainly due to the restriction taken by countries to prevent the Covid 19 pandemic, and gold demand in the jewelry sector was fallen by 34 percent sharply, reaching 1,400 tons because gold price growth was impacted negatively on the world's largest jewelry buyer countries.
Following the research of the World Gold Council, furthermore, global gold demand will be expected to by 4.2 percent on average, by 2022, it will reach 3,892 tons. According to the study, by 2022, gold demand in the jewelry sector will be expected to reach 2,008 tons, increasing average by 13 percent in a year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04790419162 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5406586537 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5656130604 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135873540991 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839814817442 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428493317356 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101593906916 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021003982068 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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