The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 34 are housed in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The bar chart illustrates information about how people from 25 to 34 years old are housed in the United Kingdom throughout given ten years, between 2004 and 2014.

Overall, it is clear from the chart that the percentage of home owners in the UK had an almost slight fall throughout the recorded period, whereas the percentage of renters rose considerably.

Focusing on home owners, the percentage reached a peak in 2004 to approximately 60% then decreased moderately less than 3% by 2006. Despite this, from 2006 to 2007 the percentage of home owners in the United Kingdom witnessed a slight rise over than 3%, in the next, it started to sharp drop by 2011. Moreover, since 2011 to 2012 it maintained steadily. At the end, the chart had a rapid fall whereas it reached to almost 35% , in 2014.

In contrast, the percentage of renters in the United Kingdom experienced a significant rise over the period covered by the chart, from 20% in 2004 to almost 50% in 2014. Although, from 2005 to 2006 the percentage of renters seems to have a moderate fall, then went up quickly and reached to its maximum percentage in 2014.
In conclusion, undoubtedly it is clear that from 2004 to 2014 whereas home owners increased, at the contrary, rented home holds decreased. In addition, from 2011 by 2013 we can say firmly that both households, renters and owners, had almost same percentage.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, whereas, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7850877193 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65534226926 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1983129354 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.222222222 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733912106779 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037086713764 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071483618026 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613661182395 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876335690813 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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