The given bar diagram illustrates information about Southland's main exports in years 2000, 2019 and future expecations of 2020 in 3 main areas which are international tourism, dairy products and meat products.
To sum up, the exports of international tourism is in increasing trend and expected to reach peak in 2020. Southland's exports of dairy products has fluctuating trend. The overseas sells of meat products are in declining trend and predicted to reach lowest in 2020.
The exports of international tourism was around 8 billion pounds in 2000 which has increased to 8.9 billion pounds in 2019 and expected to reach 9.9 billion pounds in 2020. The exports of daily products was around 6.9 billion pounds in 2000 which reached peak in 2019 and is predicted to decline to 9.4 billion pounds in 2020. Moreover, the exports of meat products is decreasing which was 6 billion pounds in 2000 and it reached 5.5 billion pounds in 2019 and thought to be decreased to 5 billion pounds in 2020.
Among all 3, the maximum exports are of international tourism in 2000, in present more dairy products are sold and in 2020 international tourism's exports are expected to be high.
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...ism, dairy products and meat products. To sum up, the exports of international ...
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...and predicted to reach lowest in 2020. The exports of international tourism was...
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...ed to reach 9.9 billion pounds in 2020. The exports of daily products was around 6....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8622754491 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69689856307 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419161676647 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7113820338 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109741629041 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675504407643 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768417777854 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113677296309 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100202477113 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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