The charter illustrates the percentage of population aged 65 and over in UK in 1985 and the prediction for 2035. It compares five states, that is England Wells Scotland Northern Ireland and UK.
In 1985, Wales constituted the largest percentage of aging population, which is 16%; whilst Northern Ireland composed of the smartest percentage of people ageing 65 and over which is the 12%. England and UK consist of the same percentage, which is 15%. Scotland has 14% of population ages at 65 and over.
Into predication of 2035, the percentage of ageing people all increase in the five states. Wales remains the top place with the percentage of aging population, which is the 26%. Northern Ireland has the smallest percentage of people aged 65 and over, which is 23%. Scotland and England has 25% and 24% respectively.
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- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In 1985, Wales constituted the largest percentage of aging population, which is...
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Discourse Markers used:
['well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.306748466258 0.268076937826 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.122699386503 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0306748466258 0.0759168565197 40% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0184049079755 0.0366838410393 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00613496932515 0.0131127313244 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116564417178 0.155750635184 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0368098159509 0.0379272487307 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76334097609 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0920245398773 0.0948980150116 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0306748466258 0.00967000014798 317% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 824.0 1161.00487805 71% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.9 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97101449275 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326086956522 0.337110787985 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282608695652 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195652173913 0.171178102325 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115942028986 0.112407865282 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76334097609 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.7115601482 49.3433353143 74% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3333333333 23.0094962315 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6678809776 42.9750493124 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 135.714022679 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.0094962315 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.111111111111 0.689975730869 16% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 43.5942028986 47.7609492067 91% => OK
Elegance: 3.125 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318596689126 0.418131533498 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163278157476 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0877694824741 0.0850326197045 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61536585995 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167836522851 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176194776694 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115426946065 0.108899403657 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.606890657293 0.367819155151 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0976678465523 0.0812612215331 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288627591606 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069789547474 0.0921553760075 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.