Dear Mr. Moc,
I am writing to inform you that I need to take time off for my summer. I have planned to spend my holiday in Australia. Therefore, I would like time off from my work to enjoy my leisure time with beach and barbeque.
I have a two-week travel plan for my vocation in Australia. I would like to leave on 10 February 2017, that is two week later from today. If I start as planed I will be able to commence my work on 26 February. Thus, my total leave will be 17 days from 10 to 26 February.
During my leave, I believe my work can be easily covered by the other part-time coworker. Since I worked 20 hours per week averagely, each of the colleagues will be allocated 10 hours, which is not an arduous task. Besides, both two personels are familiar with my work.
I am looking forward to enjoying my vocation as planned. If anything else concerns my work, please notify me before my leave.
Yours sincerely,
Jim Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... leave on 10 February 2017, that is two week later from today. If I start as planed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38636363636 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4261563231 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9009296445 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3846153846 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153189849936 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604216804552 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763358238844 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946895081498 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920982342009 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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