The chart below gives information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult americans in two of the years.
The given charts below compares the number of marriages and divorces over the period of 1970-2000 and also illustrates the relationship status of the US citizens in the same two periods.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of marriages were by far the greatest in American than divorces over the period. Likewise, the population of married adults was also maximum in both years.
According to the first chart, in 1970, the marriages figures was 2.5million whereas divorces rate stood at 1million. Over the following 3 decades, marriages experienced a gradually decrease and declined to 2million while divorces, despite slight increase in 1980 to just below 1.5m, still declined to its original position at the end of the period.
From the 2nd chart, in terms of marital status of us citizens, in 1970 and 2000, seven tenth and six tenth of the adults were married while the ratio of those who were never married stood at 20% and 15%. By contrast, the number of adults that were either widowed or divorced was minimum and their ratio fall under 10% in both years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...lowing 3 decades, marriages experienced a gradually decrease and declined to 2million while divorces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, likewise, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48985382232 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9772320643 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279565473415 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123817729606 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776471635484 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168304221354 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596459585689 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.