The chart below gives information on the percentage of boys and girls who participate in 4 kinds of sport outside school hours, including the percentage of those who do not.
The figure eludicates the rates of females and males who participate in several activities, which related to sport, outside school hours. At the first glance, it is evident that males are higher rather than females in swimming, football and basketball.
To begin with males, football and swimming have the highest percentage in comparing to other kinds of sport in which they have two-tenths and 16 in 100 respectively. Furthermore, basketball, which is lower than the first two sports, is higher instead of no sports and netball, which account for just below 5%.
In accordance with females, netball becomes the most noticeable sport since it has the highest rates among other aspects, which was at 17 in 100. Moreover, football, basketball and no sports, which make up at just beneath one-tenths, are lower rather than swimming, which constitutes at just above 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19858156028 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70429540196 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.9861050777 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120306204899 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668513214383 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080583597096 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878606340102 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565389867744 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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