The bar graph compares the living issues of City residents in major UK cities in terms of three different categories, namely health services, air pollution, and education and training in 2008.
It can be seen that the issue popular in the UK was health services, while air pollution was the lowest. The people living in London had the most reported issue by 2008.
The proportion average of health services issue in the UK was around 50%, and more than figures for education and training in Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, and Manchester. The proportion of Belfast was highest, reaching of the peak at nearly 60%, while these figures for Glasgow were under 50%. Whereas, both London and Glasgow had the education and training rate was higher health services issues, accounted for over 50%. The majority of air population issues were in Manchester, stood at over 15%, but this rate in Newcastle only was about 5%.
- The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part time 73
- The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons 61
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010 89
- the chart showns compenents of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t, Birmingham, Cardiff, and Manchester. The proportion of Belfast was highest, reac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51991561379 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9105544987 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137694230526 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882620073353 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115218877537 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13096729489 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793633692997 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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