the chart below show percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
the charts illustrate how water is consumed for three segments: industrial, agricultural, domestic zone in six locations of the world. overall, the majority of water are consumed by industry and agriculture in north america and Europe while agriculture dominates a large percentage of used water in 4 other part of world: south america, Africa, central Asia, south east Asia.
in north america and Europe, only 13% and 15% of water is used by domestic purpose respectively. in contrast, industry uses almost a half of water quantity, up to 48% compared to 39% are used by agricultural segment in north america. while, 53%a and 32% of water is consumed by industrial and agriculture in Europe.
whereas, in the 4 others areas, agriculture which consumes over 75% of water, except for in south america, about 70%.
this leads to the remaining percentage are the figure of water used in domestic and industrial segment, 16% in Africa compared to 19% in central Asia, and 19% in south east Asia. while, these figure in south america is slightly higher, 19% and 10% of water used by industry and domestic zone respectively.
- the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 73
- the graph below shows how money spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period 61
- the chart below show percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 67
- some people think that all university students should study whatever they like, others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.discuss both these views 61
- some people feel that entertainment are paid too much do you agree or disagree which type of job should be highly paid 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01604278075 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78249636563 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.930800121 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234377304366 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119214306362 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518579939288 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14796616316 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609803358885 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.