The chart below shows the allocation of funds in the town budget of Greenboro

Submitted by Rohit37 on Thu, 09/02/2021 - 02:03

The pie chart illustrates how the allocation of money is distributing in four different categories into the rural area of Greenboro.

Overall, money which distributed on school sector which is higher in three years. Whereas, the least funds allocated to the part and recreation.

To begin with, last year allocated funds were divided into school and salaries area were spent similar as (30 %). Besides this, readers had allocated funds (25percent) which less than (10 %) was spent on part and recreation. In contrast, salaries and parts and recreation allocation of funds are allocated as similar as past. Apart from this, 5 % increases on the school. However, readers on spend funds is a decline and reach 20 %.

However, in the next year of allocated funds were change in each sector of the town budget of Greenboro. In this year school and salaries, sectors budget of funds rise around 5 % and reach 40 % and 35 % respectively. In addition, readers of the allocated budget for next year was declined 5 %. Lastly, a drastic drop of funds was analyzed in the parts and reservation.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... sector which is higher in three years. whereas, least funds allocated to the part and ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
... which is higher in three years. whereas, least funds allocated to the part and recreat...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
... budget for next year was declined 5 %. lastly, a drastic drop of funds was analyzed i...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, lastly, whereas, apart from, in addition, in contrast, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03370786517 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73824335016 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2317040425 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316073922792 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121997940582 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904386228866 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180819739872 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694403163924 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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