The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar graph depicts the spare time in hours, spent by people of two opposite sexes having different work types in a week between 1998-1999. Less the working hour more was the time to relax.

The graph clearly describes that in a period of one-year elderly people, who had completed their tenure of the job, had plenty of time during a day. The jobless had also an equal amount of time period. both groups had more than eighty hours per week in the case of males. While time available to the females of these groups was just under eighty hours, followed by housewives who had approximately above 50 hours of free time. Men who had an eight-hour job in a day were just behind the housewives having around 50 hours ever seven days. The women of this group were just below their counterparts having 40 free hours available in one week. Females who worked part-time had an exact forty hours free time.

Overall, leisure to the working hours of the above mention categories. It is interesting to note that women have, generally, less time to relax than men.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... the time to relax. The graph clearly describes that in a period of one-year e...
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Suggestion: Both
...ad also an equal amount of time period. both groups had more than eighty hours per w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281553398058 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.131067961165 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101941747573 0.0759168565197 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485436893204 0.0366838410393 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0145631067961 0.0131127313244 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145631067961 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0388349514563 0.0379272487307 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29856175631 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242718446602 0.0210936926555 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111650485437 0.0948980150116 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194174757282 0.00967000014798 201% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1059.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6329787234 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276595744681 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.170212765957 0.247514529752 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.101063829787 0.171178102325 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0797872340426 0.112407865282 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29856175631 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 51.224589017 49.3433353143 104% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0909090909 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1209771174 42.9750493124 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.689975730869 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 34.1121856867 47.7609492067 71% => OK
Elegance: 2.4 2.94281807926 82% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328360983254 0.418131533498 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140807325093 0.181151798455 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0739848693192 0.0850326197045 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581404700432 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1123682386 0.157042692854 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162170228364 0.228904883108 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684267901826 0.108899403657 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312449285288 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0610488245374 0.0812612215331 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244983984873 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280269432064 0.0921553760075 30% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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