The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The double bar graph illustrates, information regarding amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status during 1989 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that unemployed and retired people enjoyed most with males surpassing females.
To begin with, in full time employed category men and women had minimum amount of time for leisure activities about 50 hours a week for males and 38 hours for females which is least among all categories. Part time employed females had about 40 hours of enjoyment time per week, while housewifes got 50 hours of leisure time. In both unemployed and retired categories both males and females had a tremendous amount of time for recreational activities with females enjoying 78 hours whereas, males about 90 hours per week. In general males got about 20 more hours of enjoyment then opposite gender.
- Pie Charts below show changes in annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981 1991 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where necessary. 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is a place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them. 84
- The three Pie Charts below show the changes in annual spending buy particular School in UK in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...89 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that unemployed and retired people enjoyed mo...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...urpassing females. To begin with, in full time employed category men and women had min...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...es which is least among all categories. Part time employed females had about 40 hours of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, whereas, while, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57819584799 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8914230489 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235298890047 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136718721122 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106085455887 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211725796452 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424166953161 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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