The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain The graph shows the trend in consumption of fast foods

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trend in consumption of fast foods.

The line graph demonstrates how much money the britain people per week expend on fast foods.
Overall, Pizza was not preferred as other two fast foods at the end of the given period. By far, Britain people spent much money on Fish and Chips in a weekly basis.
In 1970, Pizza was most bought each week by britain people around 300 dollars, while Hamburger was least eaten approximately for 30 dollars. Coming to 1980, the sale of pizza had a moderate decrease about 210 dollars whereas hamburger and fish an chips became prominent and increased gradually to 90 and 150 dollars.
After 5 year of period, the expense of people in Britain to Fish and Chips rose significantly to almost 300 dollars and in 1990 it reached its peak point. The sales of Pizza stayed constant as the figure in 1980. Public in Britain bought more hamburgers for around 300 dollars in each week at the end of the given period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6149068323 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32896893337 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4472040596 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170644527454 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853190578345 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085841418168 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140539621247 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102579362016 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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