This bar chart shows that, among four European countries, Britain, spent the highest expenditure on consumer commodities listed. From spending on personal stereos to photographic film, there is no country that has spent more than Britain on goods.
Meanwhile, France and Britain are the highest money spending on goods listed. Italy, in terms of money spending on perfumes and tennis racquets is higher than France. these two latter countries have marginal differences in expenditure of personal stereos and spending on toys is the same between two. Overall we can say that France and Italy are moderate spenders among four countries.
In contrast, Germany has the lowest money spending on goods included. Also France has lower expenditure on tennis racquets and perfumes rather than Germany, but it is still obvious that Germany has the least money spending on goods.
All in all, the chart shows that there are significant differences among four countries in money spending patterns for 6 given commodities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... tennis racquets is higher than France. these two latter countries have marginal diff...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...owest money spending on goods included. Also France has lower expenditure on tennis ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36875 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60671458689 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5230129736 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126319783448 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591564071665 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709972350336 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899458792122 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617510804505 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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