The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the average daily hours that married individuals work in their paid job.
It is clear that there is a dramatic change in both various fields of work throughout the working age divided into 4 groups. Another remarkable feature is the total hours worked by married men was the highest in the age from 24 to 44 years old. However, it is still lower than women in both approximately given periods.
Throughout the working age from 24 to 64, the husbands who were paid for jobs spend an average of approximately 7 hours a day working. However, freelancing married men at home just work daily half of 5 hours from the age of 24 to 44, after which it saw a slight decline to down work of five-fourths hours in the last 20 years of working age so the total is also decreased the same numbers of the hour.
Wives in paid employment between the ages of 24 and 44 work north of 5 hours per day, whereas others who do home jobs that are unpaid need precisely 5 hours. From 45 to 64 years old, paid work wives reach a peak time daily at around 6 hours, while others who work at home without paying fall to down work of 5 hours a day. However, they increase and decrease equally so in total, the daily time that wives spend on work stays steady at just over 10 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30991735537 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32781105837 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53305785124 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0804255713 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24516943343 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122007874977 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717807462111 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18387587936 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538976106398 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.