The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the crime rate in the inner city in three different area. The graph illustrates the crime rate changes from 2003 to 2012
which is almost a decade. In fact the diagram shows the number of incident happened in the years and the type of the cases The burglary, car theft and robbery are the main crime that happen in the year. The graph shows in 2003 the crime rates of burglary was around 3500 and slightly went up quarter of the 2003 and the crime rate dramatically decrease t around 1000 number of incident which is halved of the original crime rate. Since 2008 the burglary Crime rate was one the same rate to 2012. Car theft one third of the burglary crime. In the starting year the crime was around 3000 where the rate did not changes till 2005. After three years, the rate of crime decreased to 2000 which is quarter of the previous crime rates. The line shows that Crime rate goes up and down for a years where rate at the last year was increase by a quarter and reach & around 3000.
The less number of crime was h robbery which was halved or one third of the other two crime. In the starting year 2003 the rate was approximately 500 in the two year of interval. Crime rate move up around 1000 where the rate for robbery is fluctuate .In 2008 the crime rate was on low level. At the end of the year i.e. 2012 the crime rate was rise by quarter of its original crime rate at 2003.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23791821561 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95730841755 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401486988848 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3961025037 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6923076923 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 1.13902439024 1054% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162247907459 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908657926442 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555655815491 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170367115279 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857296530024 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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