The illustration depicts the status of rate of crime in burglary, car theft and and robbery in Panama city in a period of 9 years, from 2010 to 2019.
overall, the rate of number of incidents in burglary was the highest while robbery and car theft had a much lower rate of crime. Yet, the burglary rate dramatically decreased; whereas, the robbery's and car theft's fluctuated throughout the period.
It is clearly seen that burglary' s number was the highest, at about 3400 cases in 2010. This number reached its peak at 3750 cases in 2011. Later, it suffered a sharp decline and hit the bottom in 2015, at precisely 1000 incidents. This number was about 1250 in 2019, after witnessing fluctuation since 2015
It is notable that the rate of car theft was not steady, beginning with 2750 cases in 2010, the number remained slightly unchanged before hitting the bottom in 2013 at about 2000 cases. After that, it fluctuated and increased to 2625 incidents in 2017. The figure repeated its fluctuation
Another striking point is that robbery had the lowest rate. Starting at about 700 cases in 2010. The figure reached the peak in 2012, at approximately 1000 incidents. After witnessing a steady decrease, the data began to fluctuate and reached 750 at 2019
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...of rate of crime in burglary, car theft and and robbery in Panama city in a period of 9...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
... period of 9 years, from 2010 to 2019. overall, the rate of number of incidents in bur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53199265342 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7452274058 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0658497722117 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286166921022 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048189538069 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542685665274 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627772816259 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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