The provided line graph illustrates about the number of incidents categorised by three different crimes (burglary, car theft and robbery) which occurred in new port city between 2003 to 2012.
Overall it can be clearly seen that there was the highest number of cases in the starting year which were reported in burglary, whereas the smallest number of crime was related to robbery.
It is crystal clear that in initial year newport city saw the maximum number (around 3500) of burglary crime which was increasing sharply till 2004, dropped rapidly over the period of 2008 and was accounted less than 1500 cases followed by car theft crimes which was in the number of 2700 in the starting year, started fluctuating after a sharp decrease in 2006, and was recorded exact 2000 incidents. Moreover, till the last year the number of crimes committed related to robbery was approximately double (nearly 2800) of burglary cases (almost 1400).
Moving further, third shot of crime which was Car theft, was reported as more than 500 cases in 2003. However, it remained about stable till the year of 2007, but started fluctuating and recorded as the similar number in the last year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
...ncidents categorised by three different crimes burglary, car theft and robbery which o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccurred in new port city between 2003 to 2012. Overall it can be clearly seen ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting after a sharp decrease in 2006, and was recorded exact 2000 incidents. Moreo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95939086294 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34138397091 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6012295005 43.030603864 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.833333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107578459406 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696418667187 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858087373993 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933436438326 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948139223069 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.