The given two pie charts illustrate information the online shopping sales for four various categories in New Zealand during the year 2003 and 2013 the data is calibrated in percentage.
It is crystal clear that, during the initial year the sales of travel and after one decade sales of films and music was highest as compared to other kind of categories.
As per the first pie chart, in 2003 accorded sales of travel was 36% whereas, only 24% of cloth sold on life the percentage of online sales of films music and books was almost similar with 19% and 21% respectively.
After one decade, in 2013 the online sales of music was highest with 33% while, the least online sales of clothes of 16%.In addition, the online sales of travel and books was followed by 22% and 29% respectively
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- The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 73
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- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...he least online sales of clothes of 16%.In addition, the online sales of travel an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 654.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70503597122 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37915311531 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.1360262333 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222467299192 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148548719541 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873574510147 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148548719541 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873574510147 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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