The given line graph demonstrates the employment rates of males and females in six countries during the two distinct years 1995 and 2005.
It can be clearly observed that in the year 1995, the employment rate of males in Switzerland and Iceland was higher than the other four countries; thereafter, during the year 2005, more than 70% of men were employed in all the countries except Australia.
Turning to females, in 1995, only Switzerland and the UK had over 50% employed females, while in the rest of the nations, the females were 27 % to 47%. After 10 years, in 2005, the employment rate was the highest in Switzerland, UK, and the USA, it was above 60%, whereas in the remaining ones, it was below 55%.
Overall, having taken an overview of the above-mentioned information, it is crystal clear that the males had good employment in all the countries in both the years as compared to females.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71927530659 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8186561238 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.6 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177571194791 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101748247068 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442225367485 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115419267039 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413879527188 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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