The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017

The bar chart compares the number of people classified into six age categories visited to hospital emergency car departments in Northern Ireland in terms of december 2016 and december 2017.
It is clear that the elderly people and youngest people were the most frequent visitors to A&E (accident and emergency). There was a slightly upward trend in the percentage of emergency care attendences among all six age groups from december 2016 to 2017.
Looking first at the chart's the oldest people, the number went up by approximately 4,000 people from 64,000 to 68,000 one year later. Interestingly, those age 65-74 were less than half likely to require emergency treatment, with around 30,000 in both months. As can be seen from the given information between 16 and 44 years old or between 45 and 64 years old whom nearly 30,000 people visited to in the both period shown.
At the other end of the age scale, the figure for A&E visitors by under-5s was a mild growth of just 2,000 from 52,000 to 54,000 whereas those age 5-15 were nearly two-fifths over the one-year period.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83695652174 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48796726192 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2789749914 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272043807651 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13218099411 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152565034325 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194810342608 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141122607121 0.0819641961636 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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