The bar chart represents the difficulties based on three features which are faced by people of different ages to settle in a new place.
Overall, acquiring a new language is more challenging for aged people, while it is easy for the younger but finding a home is more challenging for them.
According to the database, the people who are aged over 55, the local language is the main barrier for most of them (in percentage 54 %) to cope up in a new destination. While, in the case of the other two groups, 29% of 18-34 aged people and 35% of the second age group face difficulties in this issue to stay in other countries.
After that, the accommodation which is the main problem for the first group, 40% of them struggling to find a living home, while just over half with the comparison with that percentage of the last group face this problem. In addition, most of the middle group struggle with that issue, and the percentage is 1 percent less than the first group.
Then turning to the last challenge, almost half (46%) of the 18-34 age people feel it is tough to make new friends, whereas half of that mention the value of the older people finding it difficult to make new acquaintances. In this group, 36% of 34-55 age people were included.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57777777778 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54897982415 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7930851593 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123836655372 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583269057251 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033372992569 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741083238786 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272487035714 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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