It is true that cultural traditions and views are different from each other in every society in the world. In some communities, people give more importance to the views of the older generation, while others have the opposite idea, to them younger should get more value than the elderly people. In the following paragraphs, both ideas will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
To begin with the former idea, first of all in many societies elder people are considered the most powerful element in the community due to their knowledge and experience. For example, when people in society have to face any difficulty senior citizens can help to get rid of this problem by giving suggestions which they gathered from their previous life stages. Moreover, from the ancient time to the era of modern civilization for most Asian families the older persons such as grandfathers or grandmothers are the role model of the family and they have significant power and influence over the family. Every family members abide by their proposition. To illustrate, when any important decision should be taken for the prosperity of the children, their suggestion is taken as a top priority and there are also other reasons, therefore, the senior people have a great value in the society.
On the other hand, not only the country but also for the family economical development the young generation has a huge contribution which can not indisputable by anyone. Because the youths have energy which is their main wealth. They can give more effort to do any task and also have the power to invent new materials which will be helpful for the nation to establish their economic growth. For instance, in American society people encourage the young stars to do some activities alongside their studies when they go over age 14. Moreover, they can easily adapt themselves to the new technologies which are important for the country.
In conclusion, for the prosperity of the nation or community young and old both have equal importance from different perspectives. Nevertheless, in my opinion, youth should have deserved more value than the elder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 797, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...nly the country but also for the family economical development the young generation has a ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n which can not indisputable by anyone. Because the youths have energy which is their m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05367231638 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70432243387 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2590216084 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134596183866 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481467709109 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509105336058 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105006693294 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764717480414 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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