Given chart depicts the issues faced by expatriates of different age groups; both finantial and health problems stood as a major concern throughout the groups.
Firstly, when considering finantial liabilities found to be increased as age advances, starting from approximately 33%. Middle age groups witnessed an escalation in money issue, while it reduced considerably in old age group,reaching as low as 28 percentage.
On the other hand, although heathcare matter stays in second priority in youth, it became serious as getting old. health issues rose to 37% in middle age from 32 that of youth, eventually declined to 31% at the end.
Finding proper educational facilities, are another annoying problem for the exparts, even though it contributed the least agonies in youth, rose exponentially in middle age groups. Old age people are least worried about the children's education.
Overall finantial and health care demands stood high priority through out the period in contrast, educating the child found to be an issue mostly in middle ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Given chart depicts the issues faced by ...
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...nt age groups; both finantial and health problems stood as a major concern throug...
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...a major concern throughout the groups. Firstly, when considering finantial liab...
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...roup,reaching as low as 28 percentage. On the other hand, although heathcare ma...
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...outh, it became serious as getting old. health issues rose to 37% in middle age from 3...
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...eventually declined to 31% at the end. Finding proper educational facilities, a...
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...orried about the childrens education. Overall finantial and health care demand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87266334157 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6403475713 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.048310871716 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251493745662 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250069291065 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0273343072301 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205384178561 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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