The chart below shows the information about reasons why men and women make a trip in 2009.
The bar chart compares the distances which men and women traveled for six different purposes in the year 2009.
It is obvious that working was the main reason for both genders to travel, and it was also the longest distance they made in 2009. Additionally, while more men went on a trip within a day to learn new cultures, more women preferred travelling for entertainment.
To be specific, both females and males traveled for a day with the shortest distance, with roughly 7,500 miles and 10,000 miles respectively. Conversely, traveling for work was the most common reason, accounted for 65,000 miles a year in total. Men also liked to make a trip for learning new culture more than women, 15,000 miles compared with 12,000 miles.
Regarding the other three reasons, women made longer distances than men. There was about 3,000 miles longer women made for going sight-seeing and shopping. Meanwhile, women traveled 25,000 miles to visit relatives and friends, was significantly higher than men did. (nearly 23,000 miles)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nearly
... was significantly higher than men did. nearly 23,000 miles
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14880952381 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58719127114 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8734409235 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178769296107 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825012515707 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558028865316 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129814536576 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361171841987 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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