The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years

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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

The line chart provides information about people who moved to urban areas in Iran, India, and Russia between 2000 to 2020 and their future predictions.

Overall, it is seen clearly from the line graph that the Russian moved to cities the most, but it overtook by Iran. Meanwhile, the Indians moved steadily to urban areas throughout the period.

In 2000, the Russians were the biggest movers to urban areas, almost 25 million per year. The next highest is Indians, with around 10 million, which was nearly eight times double from Iranians. However, by the end of the period, by 2020, people who changed their houses from rural areas increased drastically for Russia and Iran, while Indians increased steadily, there were at 30 million by 2020.

In 2025, Italian people overtook the Russians over 10 million on this list, while Italian rose to 90 million and Russians was below 90 million. By contrast, Indians were estimated at the same position with 30 million per year by 2025.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96987951807 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27985586789 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6372220898 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192244194184 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820032269281 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491229378856 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118977481172 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469770209182 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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